MarikBentusi's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Piclownjews of the World]

Good start...

but it seems to, that the movie got uninteresting for you or something like this. You should think about some real concept, you have talent.

[(2006) Trapper!]

And he danced

Madness fans will get it. Anything:
Good voices! Espeacially the high "Nohohohooo!" :D
Great punchlines, and great acting! Keep up the good work.

[Thanks for all the fish!]

It was okay...

(I gave 6 Sound Points because the music fitted to the video, but was still not too interesting. And there weren't any sounds fitting the enviroment i think....)
The movie was simply pointless... the animations and graphics are well drawn but i think... why did you make this movie and not something other? There are so many serious music videos, I only remember the really bad ones or the ones with humor, like the flat head parade. ^^
Keep up the good work!

Bentusi_Paladin

AntonyC responds:

Heh.
Not an HHGTHG fan are ye?

[Doll Ville -The Nice Guy]

OK, here some questions/critic:

1) Why didn't the girl use the amulett like the "nice guy"? Respectively why did the amulett have not the same power? Why does it only acts like it acted to this "nice guy", risking the life of his old owner. Hmm.
2) Lots of scenes are drawn in profil perspective and the limbs moved too slowly and stiff sometimes. Especially in the fighting scenes...
3) Um, why did the clock go crazy, but nothing other? Car clocks are especially hard bulit, so if it's gone SO crazy, something had also happen to the guy (biological; magnetical fields or something) or the rest of the car (electronical, spark plugs go crazy too or something).
4) The blood was a little bit undetailed... more gradients or something like that.
5) Um... the explosions were every time the same, although the one who causes them, hurts on a other type of resistance (?). So IF there are explosions, they would be seen other. Or maybe when the guy hurts the robot more sparks and otherwise more dust from the ground... Anyway, why are there explosions (Or weren't they explosions?) when you hrut someone? I could only understand it, when the guy hit the robot with the mystical powers... but the other times...

But let's get out of those unimportant minor matters and back to the movie:
The beginning was quiet good, especial the writings were good bounded into the movie sequence. I really liked the atmosphere you put into with the moon... Maybe the guy should be more emotionial when he goes to the girl. Something like: "Oh my god! What happend to her? Everywhere... blood... she... oh my god!"
Anyway, i like the movie. Keep up the good work! :)

reojionline responds:

1. I was thinking like the girl can¡¦t use it because she not the chosen one (LOL)
Any way Ill reveal it if the movie continue to the second part(at least that what I was thinking, I really want to make a long movie like 20 minutes but if you read my note„³ I got bored)
Don¡¦t worry there will be a second part if many people like this.

2. Well that¡¦s me, there more room for improvements don¡¦t you thinks?

3. about the clock? Hm¡Kdefinitely something affecting it like the power of the amulet and the man him self so that¡¦s why. Revealing more will spoil the next episode.

4. The blood? Well there is so many example, actually I don¡¦t really like to create such scene but if you want it I¡¦ll try my best

5. Now the explosion? did you see SF vs. MK 2,Well I was trying to make something like that but the computer soon run very slowly so I reduce the animation and reused in some part and it¡¦s easy for to make a movie .

Whoa that was a lot of writing. Thanks for the review

[Blockhead: Episode 6]

Great as usual!

Its as funny as easy, the punchlines (?) were just great! Blockhead is so lovley and naive, he's just great. =)

[A little Town (test fbf)]

Pretty good

Now think of some characters and a good story. :) I'm interested in your following work.

[Baker Blvd Ep1 (Part1)]

Oh no...

do you know what newgrounds is?! Its a flash portal, not a heap of garbage for real life videos! What we want is flash! Maybe your film is good - but THIS is the wrong place i think. Sorry.

zipperdeaf responds:

Naw son

[MAD WORLD!!]

Now, THATS an amazing flash! :)

i just added it to my favorites. I love the characters (especially your easy way to draw and to flash) and the interpretation of the song. :) I can't wait for your next great flash!

[Spiderman - Music video]

Nice work :)

Just improve the graphics... i like it, when important persons have the propotions of a child *g Anyway, i think you worked very hard and tried to make some really good work. Wonder whats your next flash :)

GoldenSprite responds:

I wonder too.... I just need an idea.

[Birdy in the Snow]

The yoice is too geeky o,Ô

And the story is... not so good, i think. I see that you have talent, next time you need a better topic.

DM-Demitri responds:

Thank you! For now I'm just working on the technical side of actually making the Flash work and making it available for others to see and comment on. I have alot better story-lines (and alot longer, too) but I didn't want to make those first until I could find and work out some of the other details with the ones I'm not as fond of. Thanks for your support though and I'll keep up the work!
~Demitri